The depth of emotions and the thoughts are wonderful. Although I do feel it could have been little more polished :) But then the feelings and the thoughts the poetry leaves us with, your words did that. :)
After publishing it I realized I was being too impatient to post and it is quite raw :P :D
I will improve, I am trying for it, do help me with more suggestions advices please please please *like a kid* as I always welcome them and I am honored to have you guiding :) <3
It is seldom people really care about suggesting something you know about improvements, they just read and pass by, so I have no words to appreciate this truly :)
Welcome to my blog, thank you very much for dropping by :) I am practicing it however not sure if I can call it haiku since I feel I'm not good at rhyming stuff :)
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The depth of emotions and the thoughts are wonderful. Although I do feel it could have been little more polished :) But then the feelings and the thoughts the poetry leaves us with, your words did that. :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I so much could relate to it right now :)
After publishing it I realized I was being too impatient to post and it is quite raw :P :D
DeleteI will improve, I am trying for it, do help me with more suggestions advices please please please *like a kid* as I always welcome them and I am honored to have you guiding :) <3
It is seldom people really care about suggesting something you know about improvements, they just read and pass by, so I have no words to appreciate this truly :)
Thank youuuuuuuuuuuu! <3
*hugS*
I loved this short and sweet poem.
ReplyDeleteIs that a haiku by any chance ?? :)
Welcome to my blog, thank you very much for dropping by :)
DeleteI am practicing it however not sure if I can call it haiku since I feel I'm not good at rhyming stuff :)
When you say that you are trying, you are already writing. Keep on writing. I look forward to more and more and more.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! :)
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