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Let there be, in your heart
Echo of melodies,
like the ones I have.

Let love, my love,enchant your soul
And dream those dreams
Like the ones I have!

P.S This post has been very long in my draft so I'm publishing it incomplete.
As usual I'm not very good with rhyming stuff, so this is one of those tries I make to create something poetic.


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  1. ParmitaJuly 2, 2013 at 9:21 AM

    It is definitely sweet if not rhyming. :)
    It's a poem so you are free to compose words any way you feel.
    Will you not publish the rest of the post?

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    1. Ph_July 3, 2013 at 10:09 PM

      Thank you! :)
      If/As soon as I complete it I will :D

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  2. Preeti S.July 2, 2013 at 11:12 AM

    Are you kidding me? This is really good, despite being incomplete as you say. You should definitely try and finish it, if you can. I liked this. :)

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  3. I HEARD YOUJuly 3, 2013 at 10:36 AM

    I am first time on your blog and my god! i cannot stop appreciating it. This post, It's complete in its own way. Sometimes saying less can mean more..

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    1. Ph_July 3, 2013 at 10:08 PM

      Thank you for stopping by and for your kind words :) I am honored!

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  4. Sri ValliJuly 7, 2013 at 12:34 PM

    Echo of melodies....You write expressions!! Loved this one!

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