Forever and more!

May be this once I'll stop looking at the 'other side of picture' people tend to ignore. I'll stop seeking reality and logic and behold world at its blooms, its perfection in springs, be it pseudo. I won't let myself fear the tip toeing autumns and I won't let the ache of withered leaves entwine my soul and persist!

May be this once I'll step out of obscurity and let myself be free without fearing a broken heart and in silver I'll write on stars, words that will rhyme! For once I'll let myself be guided by my heart...
And may be this once I'll start loving you... Loving you with all my heart and all of me, for centuries and more!!


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  1. uff boht hi ala PH. Kya flow hai writing main. Smooth.. and beautiful selection of words...


    I won't let myself fear the tip toeing autumns and I won't let the ache of withered leaves entwine my soul and persist!


    brilliant!

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  2. seems like a Poetry....
    nice flow.

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  3. may be or may b not...

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  4. wonerful...makes my heart sink...or float...which ever one expresses more feeling towards this post!

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  5. This one is Amazing!
    Loved it! :)

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  6. For once, leave the scientist behind and let the artist (the other one) take control. Lets not dissect everything and let it be the way it is, beautiful.

    Very nice read.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  7. @ Eddie : Thank you very much I'm humbled :)

    @ IRFANUDDIN : Thank you :)

    @ Maryam : Thank you =)

    @ majworld : Thus the confusion...

    @ herenownotforever : Thank you very much Eva :) I wonder what makes you so indecisive between sinking or floating??? :P

    @ Simran : Thank you :)

    @ Blasphemous : I've to learn to follow that. Thank you very much :)

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  8. LOL 'so indecisive btw sinking and floating'
    sinking- its so great that my heart sinks into my gut area
    floats- such a great post makes my heart float above the clouds..

    haha ...now i think ill choose it to float

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  9. @ herenownotforever : Well, fair enough then :P LOL Floating above clouds is great :)

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  10. hey maza kara diya tum ne gal.. yes go for it.. if love is as btfl as u say it is its WOW.. :)

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  11. Forever N More! To reach more we need to go beyond Forever, when forever doesn't end, then how to reach beyond ;-D

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  12. It's always good to see other side of picture.
    Take Care.

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  13. @ mahlaqa : Awe! :D Thank you so much :) And well, I'm still confused. Let the 'this once' happen and I'll go for it, blind folded :D

    @ Dua : Nice point :D Makes me kind of wonder it is one long and deep abyss I'll be stuck in if I went for *forever and more* lol
    But then are there any limitations or boundaries to true love??
    I don't know the answer cause I've yet not given up my heart. At least as far as I am concerned, not that easy to lose my possession LOL :P :D

    @ Neeha : True :)

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  14. Such a relieve to know you've yet not given up your heart, phewwwwwwww ;-P A Golden Advice: Give love, but keep you're heart to yourself, this way you won't worry about how it's treated ;-)

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  15. @ Dua : LOL @ your phew :P :D
    A very true advice, keeping this in mind I never let my heart escape me even for seconds :D *Smart*
    Thank you =)

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