Love is ......



Falls , I hear
their arrival is soon ,
colors will fade ,
blue turns the moon .
Sadness , as it tip toes
in the air .........
bleak it will get ,
everywhere !
Leaves , they'll quit
tired from the trees ,
air will whisper ,
silent melodies !
And shaded as turns ,
all paths , all lanes ..
fear not my love ,
just hold my hands !
Together we'll experience
new season , new turn ...
through black we'll light ,
our love auburn !




Comments

  1. Do this. Change this 'just hold my hand!' to 'just hold my hands!' and then change this 'new seasons , new turns..' to 'new season , new turn..'

    Else Its an amazing poem =)

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  2. lovely peom...:)
    u r improving grl ;)

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  3. kuch pallay nhi pda ;p..nice one though :)

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  4. Oh i so loved it! And the pic is so beautiful.

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  5. "fear not my love ,
    just hold my hand !
    Together we'll experience
    new seasons , new turns ..." lovely..
    amazing poem..

    Shail

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  6. @ Salman : I have made the changes there but does it look fine ? I mean sahe lag raha hai kia ?

    @ Sarah : Welcome here and thank you :)

    @ Tazeen : thank you :)

    @ Nisha : Ah ! thankies tisho :)

    @ majworld : ahahaha thanks :D

    @ Ria : thank you :)

    @ Sahil : thanks :)

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  7. woww such a beautiful and a melodious poem! lovely <3

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  8. Beautiful entry :-) [Hubby at work, this made me miss him :-P fear not my love part - lol]

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  9. love is what you write,
    love is how I feel reading your words...

    beautiful sentiments,
    well done.

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  10. @ ReeBz : thank you so much :)

    @ Dua : thank you :) [ Awe <3 sweet :) ]

    @ joejoseph : thank you :) And welcome here :)

    @ Anonymous : thank you :)

    @ Jingle : true that !
    Thank you very much :)

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  11. fear not my love ,
    just hold my hands !
    Together we'll experience
    new season , new turn ...
    through black we'll light ,
    our love auburn !

    sOper!

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  12. @ Mad Girl : Thank you very much :)

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