Love is ......
Falls , I hear
their arrival is soon ,
colors will fade ,
blue turns the moon .
Sadness , as it tip toes
in the air .........
bleak it will get ,
everywhere !
Leaves , they'll quit
tired from the trees ,
air will whisper ,
silent melodies !
And shaded as turns ,
all paths , all lanes ..
fear not my love ,
just hold my hands !
Together we'll experience
new season , new turn ...
through black we'll light ,
our love auburn !
Do this. Change this 'just hold my hand!' to 'just hold my hands!' and then change this 'new seasons , new turns..' to 'new season , new turn..'
ReplyDeleteElse Its an amazing poem =)
Mind blowing poetry:)
ReplyDeleteLovely. (:
ReplyDeletelovely peom...:)
ReplyDeleteu r improving grl ;)
kuch pallay nhi pda ;p..nice one though :)
ReplyDeleteOh i so loved it! And the pic is so beautiful.
ReplyDelete"fear not my love ,
ReplyDeletejust hold my hand !
Together we'll experience
new seasons , new turns ..." lovely..
amazing poem..
Shail
@ Salman : I have made the changes there but does it look fine ? I mean sahe lag raha hai kia ?
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woww such a beautiful and a melodious poem! lovely <3
ReplyDeleteBeautiful entry :-) [Hubby at work, this made me miss him :-P fear not my love part - lol]
ReplyDeletelovely
ReplyDeleteits lovely :)
ReplyDeletelove is what you write,
ReplyDeletelove is how I feel reading your words...
beautiful sentiments,
well done.
@ ReeBz : thank you so much :)
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@ Jingle : true that !
Thank you very much :)
fear not my love ,
ReplyDeletejust hold my hands !
Together we'll experience
new season , new turn ...
through black we'll light ,
our love auburn !
sOper!
@ Mad Girl : Thank you very much :)
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