False visions .......
Through darkness , as I dwelled in a never ending evening . After the eclipse of myself I searched for the fragments of my scattered soul . In a misty lane where I isolated myself wishing to mute all what echoed in my mind . The agonizing voices from the past , I heard yet was too numbed to comprehend ..... in the blurred visions , bleak as it was , I saw a reflection .........
.......... a glowing sketch , so perfect out of my blues . The mist fading away , through the fog that had been there for long ... I saw you ... Closer to me as you get , autumns ... they vanished with every step you took .. entering my world ....
........
beautiful... I must say, perfect arrangement of words..
ReplyDeleteI get lost reading these type of posts. What are you trying to convey here? What kind of feeling? What story? What? or just use of words?
ReplyDeleteKoi logic tou banao post ka =S
nice soothing sort of post :)..
ReplyDelete@ nZ! : thank you so much :) you got it I am glad for that :)
ReplyDelete@ Salman : umm.. See I am lost , my writings may be elaborate that fact ... like the label says *in a mist*..
It was an incomplete thought ...
I'll try to write better next time may be...
Thanks =)
@ majworld :thank you :)
*elaborating
ReplyDeletebeautiful post there :)
ReplyDeletelove ur choice of words.
*wink wink!!blues clues :P
You are one heck of a writer! How do you do it!??! Beautifully written!
ReplyDeletei imagine it as: a girl in a forest.. the golden autumn trees, the misty skies and the smell of burning wood... silence all around her, she is getting lost, but then her prince shows up =D
ReplyDeleteI find your post Beautiful!
<3
@ Anonymous : thank you girl :)
ReplyDeleteAh ! hahahaa *blues clues*
you are one of those *lucky* people who actually know me eh !:D
lol
Still laughing on blues clues =p you know it , you got it and I love you for that :D
@ hera k : Awee that was too sweet of you :) I am flattered ! Thank you very much for that girl :)
@ Sidrah : Exactly ! Liked the way you imagined :) you've pictured what I wanted to say here well ...
Prince =p lol may be , may be not ... :P
Thank you <3
hahaha :D
ReplyDeletelove ya too,love! :)
hey girl u r a great writter...
ReplyDeletei lv this post, i ws lost reading it :)
@ Anonymous : Awee <3
ReplyDelete@ Nisha : *drums* my another close friend is in the zone :D Welcome here girl :) I am so so glad to have you :D
Thank you sooooooooo much ! I am flattered that was too nice of you :)
npe...u deserved it.
ReplyDeleten sorry for joining too late :)
@ Nisha : No sorries tisho ! We are cool :) and thank you so much once again :)
ReplyDelete