Tonight!
My existence wither before your sight,
Will it be any different dawn
for you, if I die tonight?
Like autumn persists for long in hearts,
But then the love of spring delights,
And they forget of those russet leaves,
In the wake of spring that died!
So will you cherish me, or not at all?
Will my absence be felt in your life?
The answers to all lie far beyond
life, so if I die tonight??
I am speechless. This is amazing! I mean depressive and desperation driven of course, but amazing!
ReplyDeleteno words. but ill steal hers^ lol ...agreed, its amazing!
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Nice! See you rhymed, few days earlier you commented that you can't write like this, n see here you are with these nice lines. Keep writing dear, and exam me "fod k ana". lol!!
ReplyDeleteThis poem highlights downheartedness...Its nice though..nicely put in words
ReplyDeleteit matters and it will always matter... people dont change like weather yr!
ReplyDeleteSad and beautiful....sigh..
ReplyDelete@ Khadeeja : Thank you very much :)
ReplyDelete@ eva626 : Thank you :)
@ Shreya : I think this one has no comparison with what you write. I simply love the way you put words together :)
Hahahaa bus trying the best, need prayers :D
Thank you for such a lovely comment :)
@ Amigo : Thank you :)
@ Atoofa : Hmm... What if people changed long time ago and I did the same. After of course experiencing something very rough??
True though, I wish to believe. And thank you I love having you here :)
@ Sh@s : Thank you :)
"Like autumn persists for long in hearts,"
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no words.....
NIcely rhymed...good one
ReplyDeleteLoved it!
ReplyDeleteBit questions,ray of light in heart and dawn within ...
Let's see what happens tonight!
Keep Smiling Buddy :D
dark and sweet :)
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ReplyDelete@ ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ : Welcome here and Thank you :)
ReplyDelete@ Simran : Lovely lines! Thank you :)
@ SUB : Thanks :)
@ Eddie : Thank you so much :)
Umm Exams plus a few sudden responsibilities have been keeping me occupied. Hopefully back.