In Afterglow .........
as it has always been , the eclipse of moon and the afterglow ,
and again tonight it is a darker sky , slowly I see the moonlight die ...
it is a painful enough , the woes and lost love .......
obscurity increases , and fading colors ...
all the addiction , the trance divine ....
to be over blues , is a task declined ...
for all it is that I met a new me , in misty lane in melancholy .....
(incomplete and raw)
P.S. I'm seriously trying but always that the pen bleeds .......
now u r becoming an engineer, so poetry is ban on u :p
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ReplyDeletenyc write up :)
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nice :-)
ReplyDeleteNice one :) like iit..
ReplyDeleteWell, get another pen along with it... complete it sometimes. Its nice.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
@ majworld : hahaha same thing my family is been telling me :D classes start honay k bad chor dungi poetry :P =/
ReplyDelete@ Salman : thanks :)
@ Impossible : thank you very much :)
@ Sarah : thanks :)
@ Nisha : thank you :)
@ Blasphemous : hmm... thinking about it ... Thank you :)
nice :)
ReplyDelete@ Shail : thank you :)
ReplyDeletelove it,be it complete or raw <3
ReplyDelete@ Anonymous : thank you :D
ReplyDeletecomplete it! would definitley love it!
ReplyDelete@ ReeBz : yeah am thinking about finishing it :) thank you !
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