Then let it be .........
Tonight as the moon
Shines to a perfect white glow
I take thy's hand
...let's dance in the meadow
with a rhythm that plays
but in our hearts
let's forget everything
keeping every fall apart
lost in the splendour
I see no beauty but thee
And if they call it love, my love
then let it be ..................
P.S.Simplicity is what I like after all =)
P.P.S. Yeeyyy ! I can rhyme =p lol
And if they call it love, my love
ReplyDeleteThen let it be...
These two lines really touched me. Very beautifully expressed! :)
beautiful words PH..romantic poem :)
ReplyDeletend gud to see u smile again nd getting back old PH again :)
it's so beautiful.. makes me wonder how beautiful the actual feeling would be...
ReplyDeletecute one!
ReplyDeletenice.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful =) Specially the last line .. Then let it be...
ReplyDelete=)
@ Tazeen : My favorite lines :) Thank you !
ReplyDelete@ majworld : Thank you very much :) And yeah the ME is back :D yyeeyyy !
@nZ! : exactly .. it is awesome to imagine , I wonder f one walks on paths of air in reality ...
thank you :)
@ Bea : thank you :D
@ Hamid : Welcome to "As I Observed" :) Thank you so much :)
@ Sarang : Thank you very much :)
B.E.A.U.Tiful....
ReplyDeleteyou rhyme good...and a beautiful ending.
@ Blasphemous : thank you :)
ReplyDeletewho says u cnt rhyme!!!
ReplyDeletevery nicely expressed.....
em mad on last two lines, they touchd my heart ;)
OMG!!!i can feel thy love <3
ReplyDeletethe poem is sooo beautifully romantic :)
i sooo wonder who 'thee' is..awww ;)
@ Nisha : Awweee .... Thank you so much girl :) *secret* I am mad on last two lines too :D
ReplyDelete@ Anonymous : You can ?!! :D Awwee ... <3
Thank you so much dear :D
Wese you know honestly in this one I myself do not know who *thee* is :D
:)
ReplyDeletebeautiful!
ReplyDelete@ ReeBz : thanks girl :)
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