Musing In Solitude



A poem by my very dear Anonymous , something she wrote weeks back , which I am pleased to share :) Ofcourse there are certain times when one is helpless and bounded by the chains of expectations ... It is necessary to express yourself once in a while and speak up for yourself , to do what you are comfortable with not what others have compelled you to do !
Mostly we prefer silence ( me too ) .....
In the end all it is a dark night , cold tears , pen and paper ... me and myself .......
Take a look at what Anonymous says ....





I've always tried to do
To do my very best

But all u did,was complain

You always underestimate.
My self confidence was compromised,

To do what u desired

I could never learn to judge

Myself,but all around

Your discourage was help,

To mould me down to earth

I helped those whom I could

Hid my wounds cause I thought I should
But,the limits were all crossed

Couldn't help myself but burst
TO share my deepest pain

With those who never beared the same

They are,now my strength

The shame,went all in vain

I lift my head with pride

Though I may not have achieved

What u wanted me to seek

But I learned the best of all

I learned to care,to feel

But most of all,

I learned to love all.

By Anonymous .


I like your effort Anonymous and I want you to reconsider what I said , you have great skills ...
And hey ! I don't want you sad . None of my friends should feel this way :D *Splash*

Comments

  1. That was great =) it would make an awesome song, you now =o

    Loved it!

    P.s. Blog updated =D

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  2. gud sensitive poem..that friend can write well..nd now u dun speak so less that u wud hve preferred silence :p. kidding :)

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  3. @ Bea : thank you :)

    @ Nostalgic : thanks :)

    @ Tazeen : told her :D and thanks sis :)

    @ Sidah : Yeah ! It will .. :D I never thought of it though now when I read it it does seem so ... :)
    Thank you :D
    P.S. checked :D

    @ majworld : :p lol *I don't speak less* hahahaha =p sometimes :p
    thank you :D

    @ Americanising Desi : thank you :)

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  4. sooo cutee...
    i lv the meaning hidden behind these words *pure heart* :)
    tell anonymous that she's a great writter :)

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  5. salam.

    mashallah very sweet one,thanks for sharing.


    kindly read this article and share if you can.

    http://hamidswisdom.blogspot.com/search?q=what+worth+western+world+

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  6. Beautiful :-) Thankies for sharing it with us, Princess.

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  7. @ Alpha Za : Thank you :D

    @ Nisha : tish *pure hearts* is what I love too ! I told her she is :D we will tell her again together again , agreed ?
    Thank you :D

    @ Hamid : Wsalam ... Thank you very much :) Inshallah I will read it thank you for the link :)

    @ Dua : thank you so much :)

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  8. hey anonymous..mast hai yr..;-)

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  9. Nice one, although the message and the feelings she shared are beautiful, just lack some poetic rhythem.
    And believe me thats the most diffficult task to achieve when it comes to poetry :)

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  10. @ Sunya : *winks* yup it is mast :D

    @ ReeBz : indeed .. I agree with you on this one :) thank you very much :)

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  11. My dearest Princess,
    Your royal highness :)
    First of all,Thankyou soo much for everything <3
    You are the most generous Princess i've ever known or met :)

    as for the poem,its something i've been thinking about for such a long time but never had the nerve to actually put it into words...but yea!!one fine day,i actually wrote it all and poured my heart out in the form of this piece of writing...consider it a poem or a song,whichever you like :)
    its based on my life,relationship with people,experiencing the pain yet keeping it silent... :)


    thankyou all for appreciating my writing and for encouraging me to write more :)

    yours sincerely,
    Anonymous.

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  12. @ Anonymous : The bestie <3

    I know of it and something I must say I am not and never will be capable of putting such emotions , feelings , pains and hurt and experiences into words as beautifully as you have ! You have great skills and you know well we sort of are in a same boat regarding the theme of this poem !

    Let me tell you one thing my dear .
    With all that I understood the day we first met , this too that I have seen someone true and sincere , innocent and waiting to be set off to fly , to be appreciated for the skills she have ...An awesome fellow I have ever met ! A sincere and honest being *to be rarely found these days*
    And indeed I was right all along and I feel blessed to have you as a friend ..We ALL do ... *adorables*

    Never hide behind a shell your true self and feel free to express what is in your heart ! ( I hope you understood what I meant . )

    One thing for sure , a true friend you are and what I did was so less comparing to what you've given me ( always being there for me ! )

    So Thank you for everything ! for a sweet comment , a strong , true friendship and most of all for being with me here and everywhere :)

    Love you my friend stay blessed and happy :) Long live our friendship :)

    P.S. I am so humbled and I will keep those words you said about me as a compliment :D *hugs*

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  13. aww..u're making me blush :) why,thankyou :) thank god someone's there with me in the same boa... i am soo happy for that :D coz tht way we'l share our sorrows :)

    aww..u're exagerating man!!
    i am blessed to have true friends like you too <3

    yeah i do understand :) thanku for the advice :)

    nae.it was a big favor.thanku for it again :) as for being there,isnt it a job of a friend.to be always there :)

    lots and lots of *huggies*.
    thankyou for your bestest prayers :)
    insha ALLAH!!ameen :)

    P.s: :) okay sure :)

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  14. @ Anonymous : Ah ! sharing is good :) you are too modest and humble but believe me all words are by heart , I mean them :)
    No need to thanks girl :)
    And hey ! you know I am always there for you <3
    *Cheers*
    P.S. Apologies for late reply =S

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  15. oh yes it is :)
    and you are really sweet :)thankyou :)
    oops i just did :D
    yea <3
    P.s: its ok :)

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